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Thursday, November 24, 2005

A Thanksgiving Story

Dog
Chapter 1
by Kate

Edited version:

A dog on a log.

How can that be?

"We will take him home."

But he will not move.

"So we will not take him home but if we feed him he might come home with us. Yes! He came home with us."

We will feed it dog food. We will take care of it.

"Wuff, wuff." the dog said, "Wuff, wuff."

It is cold outside. Let's go outside. I know we are. Let's get a treat for him. I hope Mom allows it. We love this dog. Yes, she allows it. Our Mom is nice.

The dog is thirsty. Let's give him something to drink. He is sleepy. Let us put a blanket in a basket for him.

Original version:

A dog on a log. How can that be. "We will take him home." But he will not moov. "So, we will not take him home but if we feed him he mite come home with us." We will feed it dog food. We well take care of it. Wuff Wuff, the dog sied. Wuff wuff. It is cold out sided. Let's go outsided. I know we are. Le's get a tryt for him. I hope mom alaws it. We love this dog. Yes she alows it. Our Mom is nise. The dog is thrsty. Let's giv him someing to dringk. He is slypy. Let us put a blaigcit in a bascit for him.

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